Sticky Sentences Slow or Confuse Readers

ProWritingAid introduced me to sticky sentences. ProWritingAid says this about sticky sentences, “A sticky sentence is one that is full of glue words.” To me, it’s a special way of looking at wordiness. Sticky (or Glue) Words Glue words are words that the reader has...
Watch for the Word Some in Your Story

Watch for the Word Some in Your Story

In my readings, I’ve noticed many unnecessary occurrences of the word some. I have to ferret out that sneaky word from my drafts. But I don’t delete all of them. Sometimes some is the correct word. Where the word some works. Example > “Did you read all of the...

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