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Writers know how important it is that their characters use their five senses in stories. Today we’ll focus on scents and ways to use them.
Associate Certain Scents with Certain Abilities
Here are common associations between scents and a person’s well-being. In your stories, perhaps you could show your character reacting to scents in these ways.
- Fruit scents assist in calming anxiety. Lemon to increase clarity and apple for migraines. As Emily made lemonade from freshly squeezed lemons, Arthur drew in the citrus scent. His headache eased and a new idea struck him for the machine he’d invented.
- Lavender’s fragrance is associated with easing emotional stress and insomnia. A lavender scent drifted through Brad’s open window. He ceased his tossing and his eyelids drooped. Oh, for blessed sleep …
- Cinnamon is known for stimulating the brain, fighting mental fatigue, and increasing memory and attention span. Carly sifted cinnamon spice over each of ten pots containing simmering apples. Her nose filled with the cinnamon scent. As she stirred the cinnamon into the apple mixture, she recalled the complicated directions for Mother’s quilt pattern.
- Peppermint is thought to stimulate the mind and increase concentration. Professor Eichmann passed peppermint candies to the students at the table. As the students sucked the candies, peppermint scent permeated the air, and the brainstorming session succeeded in solving the professor’s challenge.
- Jasmine is associated with boosting confidence and easing depression. Courtney persuaded Mother to sit in the garden near the Jasmine shrubs. “Mother, let’s breath in the lovely scents of the garden.” Mother obeyed. “Dearest, I love the scent of Jasmine. This is the most hopeful I’ve felt in days.”.
Spice up your stories with scents from different fragrance families:
- Floral – flowers and bouquets
- Chemical – ammonia and glass cleaners
- Woody – pine and sandalwood
- Fruity – citrus and apples
- Exotic – ambergris and vanilla
- Sweet – chocolate and caramel
- Clean – soap and shampoo
- Nutty – peanut butter and almond
- Spices – nutmeg and cinnamon
- Minty – peppermint and wintergreen
- Strong – burning rubber and garlic breath
- Decayed – roadkill and sour milk
Synonyms for Smells
How Scents Arrive
- Cooking, baking, searing, frying, roasting
- Burning, lighting up, bug zapping, heat radiation
- Rotting, fermenting, souring
- Digging, fertilizing, spraying
- Sweating, breathing, festering
- Bathing, grooming, powdering
Verbs to Use with Smells
- Gave off
Can you add to any of the above lists?
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So helpful as always, Zoe! Thank you!
You’re welcome, Kim. Loved the scent of your comment.
Wow, Zoe, I always enjoy your posts, but this one was exceptionally helpful. Senses and scents can be difficult to describe sometimes, but these options are great! Thank you for sharing.
You’re welcome, Patti. I’m in the midst of editing so tantalizing my characters’ senses was on my mind.
Thank you for this blog. I hope you are going to do a blog on ‘taste’ too. I find it hard to fit taste into a scene.
Taste is a toughy. I’ve read that some writers consider, “She could taste the victory,” is a form of taste.
A very helpful post. Well done!
Thanks, Sally. I printed it off for myself!