39 Writing Tips to Take Seriously

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“I finished reading Tailor Your Fiction Manuscript in 30 Days. I have AND will highly recommend it to anyone who dabbles in fiction. It’s one of the best “how to” books I’ve ever read.” ~~ Marsha Hubler, Director Montrose Christian Writers Conference

See more about Tailor Your Fiction Manuscript in 30 Days at the end of the post.

If we want to write better, we should take these writers’ tips seriously. Enjoy.


“What is written without effort is in general read without pleasure.” — Samuel Johnson

“The skill of a skilled writer tricks you into thinking that there is no skill.” 
Dwight V. Swain *

“Simplicity is a virtue in writing, true; but never the primary virtue. … Vividness is.” Dwight V. Swain *

“Avoid on-the-nose writing.” —Jerry Jenkins


“A story without a theme is little more than a list of events.” —Grace Jolliffe

Opening Hooks

“A tremendous number of possibly good and even brilliant novels and short stories never get read beyond the first few paragraphs or pages by agents and editors. Why? Simple: The stories don’t begin in the right place.” —Les Edgerton *


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“Characters reveal themselves more vividly in what they do and say than in what they think and feel.” —David Corbett

“You can’t relate to a superhero, to a superman, but you can identify with a real man who in times of crisis draws forth some extraordinary quality from within himself and triumphs but only after a struggle.” —Timothy Dalton

“People generally agree that each individual is a unique blend of traits that serve to satisfy basic wants and needs according to one’s moral code.” —Angela Ackerman & Becca Puglisi *

“[An] error of inexperienced writers—or journalists in a hurry—is to confine characterization to the obvious physical attributes.” —Sol Stein *

“So when you come across an explanation of the character’s emotion, simply cut the explanation. If the emotion is still shown, then the explanation wasn’t needed. If the emotion isn’t shown, then rewrite the passage so that it is.” —Renni Browne and Dave King *

“If your character doesn’t want anything badly enough, readers will have a hard time rooting for him to attain his goal, which is what compels readers to continue reading.” —Sol Stein *

“The role of mentor is a powerful one, and can help you steer your protagonist in new directions without having to lay much ground work.” —Elizabeth Sims *

“The glory of the protagonist is always paid for by a lot of secondary characters.” —Tony Hoagland


“There are only two or three human stories, and they go on repeating themselves as fiercely as if they had never happened before.” —Willa Cather

“Remember, the essence of storytelling demands that we place our main characters on a path. A quest with something at stake, with something to do, to achieve, to learn, and to change.” —Larry Brooks

“It’s no wonder that truth is stranger than fiction. Fiction has to make sense.”  Mark Twain

“Coincidence cannot replace motivation.” — Debra Dixon *

 “Everything truly is possible as long as you help your reader understand why your characters do what they do.” —Debra Dixon *

“If you can take a little slice of the world and a little piece of dirt and really focus on details, you can drive large, seemingly spectacular movements.” David Baldacci *

“The middle of our story should be the ‘meat’ of the story, as far as conflicts and arcs. Without setting up the obstacles here, any solution in the final act will seem too easy and won’t be as satisfying.” —Jamie Gold


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“Make every word count.”  Sol Stein *

“I am dead to adverbs; they cannot excite me.” Mark Twain

The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.” Mark Twain

“Of is a preposition, and although not an inherently evil word, overusing it can make your writing sound passive and fussy.” Mignon Fogarty


“Words create sentences; sentences create paragraphs; sometimes paragraphs quicken and begin to breathe. Imagine, if you like, Frankenstein’s monster on its slab. Here comes lightning, not from the sky but from a humble paragraph of English words.” —Stephen King *


“Every scene has to have a point.” —Rachel Joyce

“Scenes are capsules in which compelling characters undertake significant actions in a vivid and memorable way that allows the events to feel as though they are happening in real time.” Jordan E. Rosenfeld *


“Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.” —Anton Chekov


“Dialogue helps to create original characters and move the plot along. If it isn’t doing either of those things, it probably should be cut.” —James Scott Bell *


“Nothing marks a skilled writer as much as his ability to write tight.” — Angela Hunt

Writing Techniques

One of the standard Words of Advice that writers—new and old—get, is to avoid clichés. The advice itself is rather a cliché but, like all clichés, it is based on truth, and it would be wrong to reflexively ignore it.” Madeleine Robbins

“What your characters observe—or don’t—can be effective red herrings.” —Jane K. Cleland *

“Since long passages in italics are a pain to read, you can only use this technique effectively for passages no longer than a sentence or two. Even this brief passage is too long, don’t you think?” —Renni Browne and Dave King *


Pacing is a tool that controls the speed and rhythm at which a story is told and the readers are pulled through the story events.” —Jessica Page Morrell


“And the truth of your experience can only come through in your own voice. If it is wrapped in someone else’s voice, we readers will feel suspicious, as if you are dressed up in someone else’s clothes. You cannot write out of someone else’s big dark place; you can only write out of your own.” —Anne Lamott *

“To me, your writer’s voice is the expression of YOU on the page.” 
Rachelle Gardner

The Ending

“If you want a happy ending, that depends, of course, on where you stop your story.” —Orson Welles


There’s never been a text written that didn’t need editing.” —David Kudler

What’s your favorite quote on writing?

* Sources where known:

  • Dwight V. Swain Techniques of the Selling Writer
  • Les Edgerton Hooked
  • Angela Ackerman & Becca Puglisi The Positive Trait Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Attributes
  • Sol Stein Stein on Writing
  • Elizabeth Sims  (Writer’s Digest May/June 2015)
  • Debra Dixon Goal, Motivation & Conflict
  • David Baldacci (Writer’s Digest November/December 2015)
  • Stephen King On Writing
  • James Scott Bell Plot & Structure
  • Jordan E. Rosenfeld Make a Scene
  • Jane K. Cleland (Writer’s Digest February 2016)
  • Renni Browne and Dave King (Self-Editing for Fiction Writers)
  • Anne Lamott  Bird by Bird

Buy Link

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Zoe McCarthy’s book, Tailor Your Fiction Manuscript in 30 Days, is a fresh and innovative refocusing of your novel or novella. Through a few simple—and fun—steps, Zoe helps writers take their not-ready-for-publication and/or rejected manuscripts to a spit-polish finish. Writing is hard work, yes, but it doesn’t have to be difficult. —Eva Marie Everson, best-selling and multiple award-winning author, conference director, president of Word Weavers International, Inc.

If you want to increase your chance of hearing yes instead of sorry or not a fit for our list at this time, this book is for you. If you want to develop stronger story plots with characters that are hard to put down, this book is for you. Through McCarthy’s checklists and helpful exercises and corresponding examples, you will learn how to raise the tension, hone your voice, and polish your manuscript. I need this book for my clients and the many conferees I meet at writer’s conferences around the country. Thank you, Zoe. A huge, #thumbsup, for Tailor Your Fiction Manuscript in 30 Days.  —Diana L. Flegal, literary agent, and freelance editor

Tailor Your Fiction Manuscript is a self-editing encyclopedia! Each chapter sets up the targeted technique, examples show what to look for in your manuscript, then proven actions are provided to take your writing to the next level. Whether you are a seasoned writer or a newbie, you need this book! —Sally Shupe, freelance editor, aspiring author

McCarthy crafted an amazing self-help book that will strengthen any writer, whether new or seasoned, with guidance and self-evaluation tools. —Erin Unger, author of Practicing Murder, releasing in 2019

Need to rework your book? Zoe M. McCarthy’s step-by-step reference guide leads you through the process, helping you fight feeling overwhelmed and wrangle your manuscript and into publishable shape in 30 days. Tailor Your Manuscript delivers a clear and comprehensive action plan. —Elizabeth Spann Craig, Twitteriffic owner, bestselling author of the Myrtle Clover Mysteries, the Southern Quilting Mysteries, and the Memphis Barbeque Mysteries http://elizabethspanncraig.com/blog/

Christmas Scavenger Hunt Round-Robin: The Gift of the Magpie

Merry Christmas and greetings! I hope you are enjoying the Christmas Scavenger Hunt Round-Robin and learning about many Christmas books. Remember, you need to visit every author’s site in the round-robin to qualify for the chance to win an Amazon $300, $150, or $75 gift card. And you must provide the answers on this Google Form.

Thank you, for the opportunity to share about my book Gift of the Magpie. I love to talk about my tender and humorous romances that show that opposites distract.

Amanda Larrowe is an English teacher and an award-winning author of middle-grade adventure books for boys. It’s a few days before Christmas and Amanda is holed up in her house to meet a January 2 book deadline. Now, in the deepest snow accumulation Richmond, Virginia, has ever experienced, Camden Lancaster moves in across the street. After ten years, her heart still smarts from the humiliating aftermath of their perfect high school Valentine’s Day date.

Camden may have transformed into a handsome, amiable photographer, but his likability doesn’t instill trust in Amanda’s heart. When he doesn’t recognize her on their first two encounters, she thinks it’s safe to be his fair-weather neighbor. Boy is she wrong.

I had so much fun writing this book. You’ll find the answer to my scavenger question, but what the Magpie is remains buried in the story. The magpie is not a bird!

Go to the book at this Amazon link. When Cam came to Amanda’s door, what did he ask her for? When you have the answer, fill out this Google form and head to the next blog.

Thanking you for your visit. On with the scavenger hunt! Marissa Shrock is the next author on the tour, telling us about her Christmas book, Deadly Holiday. You can find it at at this link. Remember, the round-robin will end on December 16th at 11:59 PM EST!

Writing Help: Pay It Forward with These 6 Gems

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You can pay forward the writing help you received and continue on the road to excellence at the same time.

I pay forward the coaching I received in my writing journey with the same gems that molded me most.

         contest feedback 



                                    writing retreats

                                             blog posts

                                                      books on writing

Here are thoughts and pointers on each.

1.  Be a judge for contests. If we give quality feedback with the right attitude, entrants will less likely feel under attack. 



  • Don’t sign up to be a judge, if you’re not able to give the entries the time they need.
  • Find something the entrant did well and build from there.
  • Include examples in your feedback. Some of us need applications to get it.

2.  Lead a workshop. Participants arrive eager. Strive to assure they leave with at least one ah-ha they can’t wait to try.



  • Don’t assume, because you gave the instructions, participants have gotten the principles. Give the instructions in an alternate way.
  • Give many examples.
  • The more workshops you lead on the subject, the more pitfalls in understanding you’ll observe and be able to address.
  • More tips. And more.

3.  Join a critique group. Because the rest of the group will voice the obvious problems, try listening for a subtle problem. For example, the writer may use vague words throughout the scene. Give suggestions for specific words that will get the writer’s juices flowing.


  • For online or email groups, limit the number of people. If you’re writing, marketing, and working on your platform, you won’t have time to do a good job on six submissions each week.
  • Learn the level of “tell-it-like-it-is” each member can handle, but always give feedback in a non-threatening manner.

4.  Hold a small retreat. Ask each participant to share one writing principle or technique. Nothing like having to teach something to learn something.



  • Give an exercise that participants can apply to their work in progress and provide time for participants to creep away and work on it.
  • Schedule time for participants to do what they like best – talk about writing.

5.  Write blog posts. Give tips on your blog as a post or an inset on each post.



  • Do the research.
  • Write posts on the writing activity you’re doing that week, e.g. softening an unlikeable protagonist.
  • Read magazines like Writer’s Digest.

6.  Write a pamphlet or book on writing. This is an undertaking. One that I know. I’ll tell you about Tailor Your Fiction Manuscript in 30 Days soon.



I’ve found that every time I pay forward the help I’ve received, my own work moves toward my goal for excellence.

Pay forward the writing help you’ve received with these 6 activities.  Click to tweet.

How do you pay forward the help you have received so far?

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