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Besides looking for heavier story problems, you can look below for simple errors that crop up in your critique partners’ submissions.
1. Then. Place a comma before “then” in sentences.
Incorrect: Elmo raised his eyebrows then smiled.
Correct: Elmo raised his eyebrows, then smiled.
2. Was going to or am going to. Shorten to “would” or “will.”
Wordy: Amy was going to hate her gift. “I’m going to buy you something else,” Elmo said.
Better: Amy would hate her gift. “I’ll buy you something else,” Elmo said.
3. So that. Can often delete “that.” No comma before “so that.”
Incorrect and Wordy: Elmo donated fifty dollars, so that Amy would think he cared.
Correct: Elmo donated fifty dollars so Amy would think he cared.
4. Already. The word is often unnecessary.
Wordy: Elmo already had the five dollars he needed. By now, Amy should have already arrived at the store.
Better: Elmo had the five dollars he needed. By now, Amy should have arrived at the store.
5. That. Can often delete “that.”
Wordy: Elmo feared that Amy liked Barry. He hoped that she’d change her mind.
Better: Elmo feared Amy liked Barry. He hoped she’d change her mind.
6. Just. Can often delete “just.”
Wordy: Amy turned to a group just entering the building.
Better: Amy turned to a group entering the building.
7. Suddenly. Should delete most occurrences of “suddenly.”
Wordy: Elmo calmed, then suddenly a policeman appeared.
Better: Elmo calmed, then a policeman appeared.
8. Began to or started to. Can often delete these phrases, especially when the character is not stopped.
Wordy: When Amy began to open her mouth to speak, the bus arrived. Elmo stood and started to walk to the bus.
Better: When Amy opened her mouth to speak, the bus arrived. Elmo stood and walked to the bus.
9. Into, in, or in to. “Into” is used with actions. “In” is used to show position. “In to” is used when the “to” belongs with a verb that follows “to.”
Correct: Elmo drove to the library. With a book in his hand and planning to walk in toreturn a library book, Elmo opened the door. He stepped into the library, returned the book, then strolled into the aisle labeled Mysteries, where he stumbled into Amy.
10. There was or wasn’t. It was or wasn’t. Rewrite sentences using “there was,” “there wasn’t,” “it was,” or “it wasn’t.”
Wordy and passive: Because there was no sign of a struggle, it was believed the perpetrator attacked her by surprise.
Better: Because authorities found no sign of a struggle, they believed the perpetrator attacked her by surprise.
What other quick fixes would you recommend to critique partners?
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